I'll help you with applying to LUMS (Personal Statement + Extracurriculars)

I randomly commented that I'd be happy to help people with their PS or ECas and got a few DMs, so I thought I'd make a proper post.

For some context, I got into SDSB last year within the first few days of decisions, despite a not so stellar SAT (mostly because of a weak Maths score) and I believe this was mainly due to the effort I put in my essays. I also got into LSE, Kings, Warwick with a 50% scholarship, HKUST etc all with essays I wrote myself (couldn't attend because too expensive.)

Fortunately, I come from a great school in a major city and had a dedicated counselor to edit my essays - a luxury not afforded to many. I know external counselors are crazy expensive, so I think this would be a good alternative. So essentially, I'll make comments, edits, and suggestions on a draft you will write, because only you know your familial, and personal life the best. To be clear, I won't write your essay for you, but what I can do is:

- Give your essay that final polish through edits, suggestions, etc

- Provide excerpts from my own or friend's essays depending on the school you're applying for

- Help you with how to write about extra-curricular activities, make them sound impressive, and tailoring them to the major/school you're applying for

- Provide general tips, and advice regarding the whole application process.

If this interests you, please feel free to comment below or DM me. We can work out an individual rate based on how far along you are in the application process, go cheaper if you can refer friends etc. I promise it'll be really minimal and something most people can afford.