Red Right Hand - Western/Thriller [Act 1]

Edit: This version have since been removed as I am continuing with act 2. Thanks for the feedback!

Forgot to include page count in the title - it's 27 pages.

Hi everyone! New to this community, and truly happy to be here.

I've been dabbling in screenwriting for a number of years -- Always scribbling away, never finishing anything. Thought I'd change that this year.

I would love to get constructive feedback on this little revisionist western I'm working on.

(This is the first draft of the first act, so it's rough around the edges to say the least. But my gut feeling says it could be the start of a good ol' fashioned revenge story.)

Logline: After his family is slaughtered by outlaws, a Civil War veteran infiltrates the murderous gang to exact his revenge.

PDF: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1FPhhNGneOFosGBfacc-Ytys7hdKR_OCQ/view?usp=sharing