Feedback on feature script, couple scenes
Title: “Off Script” Genre: Horror/Comedy Logline: A middle school theater teacher is killed, 8 years later his last graduating class begins getting slaughtered one by one as only two remain alive, will they be able to figure out who the killer is and what they want? Pg. Count: 15 To read: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ytKZ2vcrP1waieADsICn09-nNNzuW4dA_Gtijg7rgn8/edit?usp=sharing
Hey guys! Just looking for feedback on my first rough draft script of a screenplay I’ve been working on. Thank you to anyone who wants to check it out and I appreciate any advice or criticism!