Feedback for this look

Hey girlies, So yesterday i posted a look on this sub, i got almost the similar comments where the blush was less, giving a lifeless look to the face. Yes the blush was actually in the pictures. But this time i have added more. Many girlies here suggested me to go for merlot or red shades as i have warm undertone. Though i m not a big fan of these shades because it makes me look like a more mature women than being a girl. Idk u guys tell is it true? I mean m i looking more mature now? These are quite bold shades for me bt anyway i gave it a try, i usually like to have just brown lip liner and plumpy glosses or sometimes nude browns. Talking abt the cakey and patchy look of the make up, well i m using the smashbox studio full coverage foundation, the issue is with this foundation as i have checked alot of youtube reviews everyone is complaining the same cakey look effect from the foundation and suggested to use a beauty blender not a brush for this, guess what they are right i used the beauty blender today and it worked much better. For mosituriser i used a rose mist and glycerin, not used orange corrector today i felt its not for me, i just need some same tone concealer and top it with 1 tone bright foundation and its more than enough. I did alot of contouring today on cheeks, maybe a little less visible on cam but in real it looks so so to me. I used clicked pictures in white and warm white and yellow lightings to cover the real make up as much as possible. Also do this nose stud suits on me ?? I have added the natural face image (8) maybe with this you guys can help me more for how to contour and what other things i can do better. Please let me know your feedback for this. How can i improve more on this.