This seems better to me

I have nothing against comical and twisted romance. But since I like Ataru like a kick in the ass, I would much rather see the school life of Lum and her friends.

I doubt that Rumiko has ever wanted to make Magical Alien Girls in her career as a mangaka. But since his romance in this work is objectively the weakest of his three best-known works

I have nothing against comical and twisted romance. But since I like Ataru like a kick in the ass, I would much rather see the school life of Lum and her friends.

I doubt that Rumiko has ever wanted to make Magical Alien Girls in her career as a mangaka. But since his romance in this work is objectively the weakest of his three best-known works