[Daily Discussion] First Page Feedback- March 12, 2022

Welcome to our daily discussion thread!

Weekly schedule:

Monday: Writer’s Block and Motivation

Tuesday: Brainstorming

Wednesday: General Discussion

Thursday: Writer’s Block and Motivation

Friday: Brainstorming

Saturday: First Page Feedback

Sunday: Writing Tools, Software, and Hardware

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Welcome to our First Page Feedback thread! It's exactly what it sounds like.

Thread Rules:

• Please include the genre, category, and title
• Excerpts may be no longer than 250 words and must be the first page of your story/manuscript
• Excerpt must be copy/pasted directly into the comment
• Type of feedback desired
• Constructive criticism only! Any rude or hostile comments will be removed.

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